The art of developing client stories that speak to the head and the heart

Storytelling is a gift. Good storytellers captivate audiences. You could say it’s an art-form. The corporate version is equally impactful, when done well.

This blog looks at one version of storytelling, specifically, the different styles of case study we can create for different situations. It looks at how to open up a story when considering the buyer journey and what your future clients need to hear and feel, and when the right time is to open up different perspectives.

Have you got a compelling story to tell?

Choosing the right client situation to build a case study is an important step. If the client story is not a strong example of the best type of work you want more of, your most profitable ‘trophy’ client examples, then wait until you have one. (While you wait, consider building an ideal client scenario to show people the type of work you are aiming for).

The most important thing to get right from the start of any client project is that you need an emotional and logical connection with what your client is going through. It’s really hard to write a compelling case study if you don’t have these ‘ducks in a row’ from the beginning.

It’s really easy for professional service (PS) we firms to build technical ‘what we did’ focused case studies. What people always struggle to write about are not the issues or risks – it’s the opportunities, benefits and impact that is missing.

These messages are crucial for showing existing and future clients that you add value and are differentiated throughout the buyer journey. Considering and gathering this information starts at the first meeting and continues into delivery and out the other side. Many PS firms place the majority of performance measurement on revenue generated, rather than including a healthy view of the impact – that is quantified and reported on before, during and after a project.

This goes beyond Net Promoter Scores in assignment feedback. It means really quantifying the impact on the bottom line, value creation, change management or risk reduction.

The emotional impact is just as important, remember what your client says throughout, probe around what it means to get it right (or wrong), or do nothing. Get under the skin of how this needs to impact what the business does today and in future and what it means to from employees, right up to leadership and shareholders.

Primary considerations for case studies

With case studies, more is better. Don’t try to serve all your audiences with one case study. You might need 2-3 different case study formats to address different stages of the buying process. And considering the different stakeholders involved at different stages.

I’ve got some general things that help bring a story to life for prospective clients, depending on the situation and what’s appropriate:

  • Key message at the top – your impact headline to describe what you helped the client achieve. The one memorable thing you helped them achieve.
  • Summary/ background – shortened to key facts, not acres of detail.
  • Top 3 challenges for the Board/ Senior leadership. You could also include the key exam questions you agreed for your work to focus on. If people often misunderstand exactly how many different stakeholders are affected by the problems and what it means long term – show the breadth of stakeholders involved.
  • If there’s a strategy angle to a more technical case study that gives market perspective, include it – shows depth of knowledge and context. If there’s a public/ reputation angle then consider showing an example.
  • Your solution should be in highlight format eg filter to the top most tricky or challenging aspects rather than describing the whole thing. Ideally this should subtly emphasise your points of differentiation. Think about what people usually misunderstand or incorrectly approach without your help – and the holes that gets them into. You want to help any future clients avoid even contemplating DIY.
  • Position all upside comments as success factors and key considerations – demonstrating that you can filter what’s important and help get to the heart of value.

Think about different case studies for the buyer journey

STAGE 1 OF BUYING: Awareness

Your awareness buyer is really a researcher. They might have identified symptoms of a problem they have, and they’re looking for ideas, suggestions and perspective on how to diagnose things. As they start their research process they’ll also be looking for high level insight as to what’s involved in solving problems like this and scouring for perspectives they hadn’t considered.

This is ideal for your website – for general promotion and often targeted at the mid-level management or buyer, rather than the c-suite. Buyers at the awareness stage are looking for:

  • Some of the typical issues would be good to show here. At a high level they want to learn how to solve a business problem they’re facing and what outcomes to expect, based on the experiences of others.
  • To get a quick synopsis of what you do and the value it creates, by learning through a story.
  • A quick digestible overview of your client’s situation, their pain points, the solution applied and the results achieved – to gauge if it will be useful to their learning process.

STAGE 2 OF BUYING: Consideration

The consideration stage buyer has already resolved themselves to solve a problem, they’ve made some assumptions about the appropriate remedy to the problem, and they’ve probably identified a couple of likely firms to help. Now, they’re trying to see if there is enough emotional evidence to invest the dollars, people and time to move forward – this is often part conscious (physical) and part sub-conscious (emotional).

You also need to start thinking of the different stakeholders that are typically involved at this stage – everyone has a boss to think of, so consider what helps them show their boss that you are best placed here.

This is ideal for a client meeting or presentation – for more specific consumption. Byers at the consideration stage are looking for:

  • Inspiration and a vision of a better reality — both for their company and for them.
  • A reason for action that’s got an emotional connection. To see how passionate and invested, you might be, in your clients success.
  • To see more technical detail and even get a feel for any demos or examples.
  • A client’s perspective on the problem they had and the outcomes they achieved, through a relationship with your firm. Quotes of their perception before and after you helped them. Even a video of the client telling part of the story themselves.


The decision stage buyer is looking for reassurance that your firm is the right one to solve their problem. They’re looking to minimize the risk of making a bad decision and increase the likelihood that they’re making a good one. The most senior stakeholders are usually involved here, depending on the value of what you offer, so talking to their needs is key.

This is ideal for a proposal or pitch – for specific use and incorporating the awareness and consideration stage details in your orals. Buyers at the decision stage are looking to:

  • Confirm their decision with logic that gives evidence for the more senior decision makers.
  • Gauge your depth of experience, relative to their specific needs – are you helping them see risks and opportunities they were unaware of (teaching them collaboratively) or just responding to their requirements?
  • See a direct correlation as to why your case study is of relevance to their own situation.
  • To discern what it would actually be like to work with your firm – the ‘in the moment’ stories you tell in the pitch, show your perspective on what made it enjoyable, interesting, rewarding, challenging or almost impossible.
  • To speak to your reference clients themselves and hear what really made a difference in their words. To hear how much they valued working with you and the impact you delivered, in tough times and when things were easier.
  • Above all, the energy and joy you channel in describing any story is important. Likewise your ability to artfully describe the more challenging aspects and honestly show how the unforeseen was smoothly dealt with, will give an honesty, depth and considered vulnerability that’s important when building advisor-client relationships.
  • If you need a hand remembering your stories, including fact and emotion in significant events, try reading Simon Sinek’s book ‘Find your why’. It is very relevant in a corporate setting could help in developing stories, not just case studies, that have impacted you along the way.


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    Sales books – winter fireside reading

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    If you are like me, interested in what’s emerging in the sales world, then there’s some really inspiring books to get your hands on for a spot of fireside reading.

    My top 3 sales books

    I loved these three books and for many different reasons, but my #1 is The Challenger Sale…

    The Challenger Sale, how to take control of the customer conversation – by Matthew Dixon and Brent Adamson of CEB. I love the whole book and carry it around with me, still. It’s so on the customer agenda of today, it’s scary. The biggest takeaway for me is the way sellers need to link to what people normally do and then reshape what’s possible to deliver greater and unexpected returns and learnings. I’m next going to read their Challenger Customer book (see below).

    Sales EQ, how ultra high performers leverage sales-specific emotional intelligence to close the complex deal – by Jeb Blount. This flows really nicely from The Challenger Sale and the first quarter pages are especially rich with buyer insight and the psychology of selling really well laid out.

    The sales acceleration formula, using data, technology and inbound selling to go from $0 to $100m – by Mark Roberge. Really inspiring to see how Hubspot was grown into the success it is today. In particular their bespoke buyer persona/buyer’s journey matrix (which illustrates the different personas and stages of the buyer’s journey) and shows when marketing leads are originated and scored, and when its the right time to hand them over to sales. An excellent read to show that firms need to invent their own systems and make them work in their unique environment.

    Other recommended books I have on my reading list for the coming months

    The Challenger Customer, selling to the hidden influencer who can multiply results – by Matthew Dixo, Brent Adamson, Pat Spenner and Nick Toman at CEB.

    The way we’re working isn’t working, the forgotten needs that energise great performance – by Tony Schwartz (with Jean Gomes and Catherine McCarthy. Looks at how to re-energise your life to be more satisfied and productive.

    Sales management simplified, looks at how to get the best out of sales teams as a leader – by Mike Weinberg.

    Happy reading!


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    How to keep your top sales people

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    Lately I’ve been fascinated about how to keep top sales performers in any business, but especially in a start-up. This is a make or break activity that can really demonstrate to the wider sales team how much you value them and that you want to embed them in your business for the longer term.

    I’ve seen some pretty dishonourable activities towards salespeople in the past. One of note was a ‘big game’ sales person who smashed his annual sales target three times over with a single deal. He was applauded by the Board and then swiftly sacked before they had to pay his commission. Let’s just say the mood music went significantly downhill from that point on and other good sales people started job hunting.

    I’m sure everybody has a horror story they’ve either witnessed or had the unfortunate experience personally, but I’ve been really interested in what works in today’s sales world?

    Here’s what I’ve learnt:

    Look at the maturity stage of what you’re selling and hire for specific skills and experience

    If it’s an early stage initiative you will need a really inquisitive, go-getting sales people who know how to hunt for and open up cold relationships, to qualify and close new new business from scratch. They can do this without a clearly defined value proposition, sales process, support or management (if they are still in production).

    If you’re selling more established and complex solutions you can probably hire a consultative sales person who’s worked in big organisations. This person needs a professional sales process and environment with all the trimmings to farm warm relationships and convert deals as part of a team.

    Get it wrong at the hiring stage and you’ll likely have a sales vacancy inside 12 months when it didn’t work out for the person concerned.

    Look at the personality of the salesperson when hiring

    A successful salesperson is inquisitive and always learning. They will have a top sales book and their recommended reading list (that is current and not from 20 years ago).

    They will have numerous interests outside of work which are multidisciplinary. They will find things interesting with lots of different people.

    They will have a relatable personality on many different levels. This could include humility, inquisitiveness, a sense of urgency and coach-ability.

    You are looking for a good fit – between your business culture, sales team, sales manager and the individual sales person. That doesn’t mean everyone has to be the same, but at least know you have and are adding.

    In asking questions and explore the logical and emotional aspects of everything – the right people should more often get hired and they will hopefully remain interested and motivated to make a difference to your sales function.

    Provide a fair and well calculated volume of qualified leads

    This means regular analysis of segment and people performance. Then form agreement on which areas need a boost, versus those that are doing well.

    The data and analytics team will need to prioritise providing quality targets where they are most in need AND the lead generation function will need to prioritise their efforts as well.

    You need to ensure that all elements of the team are not just focusing on achieving their own targets, but are creating value through the sales chain to intimately deliver qualified leads that close.

    Fail to do this at any stage and your sales function will lose motivation (possibly blaming others for not doing their roles properly) and your team environment will be in tatters.

    Measure performance simply and consistently

    Any employee needs a fair and transparent performance measurement system, but for a salesperson this is central to their world.

    Successful sales functions measure the best sales people with quantitative and qualitative data points around what specifically works for them. Even if the CEO is the first salesperson, measure what works and use the information for any new sales hires.

    This can then be used to benchmark the rest of the sales team. Many sales managers find the difference between great and mediocre salespeople, is actually how well they plan and how well they are able to think from the customer perspective.

    This means both logically and emotionally, to really understand their unique situation and reshape the vision for success collaboratively – to transform complexity and ambiguity into something that creates enduring value.

    If you don’t know what performance gap you’ve got, you can’t inspire and challenge a salesperson to do better. Give them the tools and mentoring to effect change and help them be more successful, otherwise you could just end up ruthlessly cutting the bottom 20% of sales performers and spending a fortune on recruitment.

    Sales management isn’t the only form of promotion

    Give them all an even playing field in order to be successful. Recognise their performance, show they’ve had impact and are important to you.

    Many sales functions use management or operational roles as promotion, but we already know that not all rockstar salespeople are great sales managers. You could say this is relevant for any discipline, including marketing.

    Instead you might get some real benefit in having your best performer coach and mentor some of the other sales team members as a side project, while still doing what they do best.

    Or constant change and new challenge might instead keep them motivated. At key stages move them onto a different area of refocus and slightly adjust their responsibilities. Do it at a rate at which they feel works for them.

    For example, I’m attracted to transitional or green fields opportunities to develop something from scratch. I love the strategic and creative process in consultative selling and hate doing transactional sales. I hate the feeling of stagnating as I get to the phase when managing established initiatives that need a steady, and equally important, pair of hands.

    I’d like to say that in every role, I’ve been asked ‘what motivates me?‘ when I joined and 12 months later ‘what will keep me happy and engaged?‘. But I’d be lying.

    Conversely, your medium performing sales person might be a brilliant team player and superstar sales manager, so giving them the opportunity to develop their career with you as well is equally important.

    This way no one is left out and it creates a duel approach for the different kind of sales people you need in your team.

    Don’t split sales roles into vertical specialisms too soon

    The easiest way to scale sales by transformation is to keep the team working TOGETHER (think co-creation and collaboration). Trying to do too much with too small a team, is the death knell in really smashing the overall sales target.

    If you’ve split your sales team out too soon, it’s also really hard to understand if a lack of performance is the salesperson or something else, like the product, market, targeting or value proposition that’s not working.

    Keep it simple and focussed.

    Even if you have a rainmaking new business sales person that is happy forging ahead with 100% conviction that what they are doing is right, they will still need a team to help them achieve their goals.

    They need to EQ and IQ to bring a team together, the vision to set the course and the strength to keep people on the bus.

    If your rainmaker sales person upsets the whole team ecosystem and rides roughshod over relationships, you’re going to have a hard time keeping the whole sales team motivated and achieving sales growth.

    Compensate honestly and easily

    Be honerable with the commission they’re due. Don’t constantly change the commission structure and fold in complex kickers or commission caps. Use a really simple commission formula, one which people can easily work out in their heads what they will get. If they sell, reward them for their efforts.

    It will cost you more in the long run if your top sales performers leave, due to unpaid commission, than it is to pay them what they are due and keep them in your business.

    You want an environment of healthy envy that the top performers are valued and allowed to progress.

    Many high performing sales leaders also talk of never capping sales commission.

    If people work hard and exceed their sales targets (selling products that can be delivered), they should be rewarded.


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    Marketing campaigns that START with sales ROI

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    Professional services marketing campaigns are usually great at generating brand presence, but a sales led campaign is often illusive.

    So what can you do to turn this on it’s head?

    Start with your expected sales process and desired marketing campaign elements to then rethink, rebuild and redesign them together. They have to be 100% connected. If your sales team and the marketing department work independently from one another, then stop reading this blog post!

    To bring this to life, take the (sometimes humble but usually gigantic) research report: you might have invested in some proprietary research and produced a hefty report – don’t just allow people to register for a copy of the report on your website or hand out copies in sales meetings (or worse still, pop them in your office reception). STOP, and think sales first…

    • Unique thinking to unlock prospects: Unearth interest from the right prospects, get your foot in the door and help them hear big, innovative and compelling things they didn’t know and which they will struggle to fix themselves. Find the right balance, between differentiated insight and researching something you can actually link to your products and services. Your research report needs to help your sales people position how people normally approach the topic – badly – and challenge them with a different way of thinking. Sounds simple, but I see many research reports that quote a million stats but have zero connection to businesses issues or real life examples and a sales team that is unable to convert opportunities from it.
    • Formats have moved on: A 40 page PDF or glossy tome is dull. Digital formats are way more compelling, allowing prospects or your sales team to manipulate the data and personalise it nay adding more deeper level insight along the way. This could reveal data driven evidence that there is widespread stakeholder engagement and show you their interests. This will also help get your campaign closer to the most compelling themes and stories that actually convert sales – and keep it relevant for longer.
    • Connect it to your pipeline: Ensure your whole salesforce are collaborating on the campaign strategy and immerse people so they are on-point and hungry to participate. Use the data to help convert opportunities – work out what you hold back in the really short public report and what is revealed to help close qualified opportunities. It’s rare to close new business leads in a single meeting, so plan how your marketing campaign elements can support multiple meetings.

    For this to work the sales and marketing teams need to be integrated and committed. To create an agile sales led marketing campaign… 1) keep it simple with no more than 3 ideas to integrate the marketing elements into your sales process and keep doing what’s working; 2) stop doing what isn’t adding value to the sales process; 3) start doing something different if you aren’t getting the desired results.

    Most marketing campaign elements can be redesigned to connect with and support the sales channel.


    See my blog for further reading on how to generate revenue from a marketing campaign


    Further reading from HBR on how to KEEP | STOP | START: Why all companies (and their sales and marketing departments) need to do regular initiative reviews


    Want to explore how you can take a sales led approach to your campaigns? Contact Edler Consulting for an initial conversation about how you can integrate a sales driven focus to your marketing campaigns.

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